Mattia

Hi, my name is Mattia Gaio and I'm sixteen. I live with my family in Seren del Grappa, a small town big village near not far from Belluno, in the North-East of Italy, . I attend in a scientific school called Liceo Scientifico dal Piaz, in Feltre. I like football and music, and my favourite football club is Milan. Last year I played football, in a team (?) but I had to stop because of an injury, so now I go to a gym to keep fit.
I don't have some any working esperience, but I can do some work in electronics, and I sometimes help my dad in the garden works. I can't cook.
In      free time I often play football with my friends or I listen to music.

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Hi, my name is Mattia Gaio and I'm sixteen. I live with my family in Seren del Grappa, a big village not far from Belluno, in the North-East of Italy, in Veneto. I attend a scientific school called Liceo Scientifico dal Piaz, in Feltre. I like football and music, and my favourite football club is Milan. Last year I played football in a team called Union Ripa la Fenadora, but I had to stop because of an injury, so now I go to a gym to keep fit.
I'm friendly, reliable and calm, and also a hard worker.
I don't have any working esperiences, but I can do some work in electronics, and I sometimes help my dad in the garden works. I can't cook, but I can speak three different languages: Italian, English and a bit of French. In the future I would like to became a doctor, but the road is very long.
In my free time I often play football with my friends or I listen to music.

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Daniel

Hi, my name is Daniel, and I'm 16 years old.
I live with my family in Pedavena, a small town near Feltre, in the province territory of Belluno, in the north-east of Italy.
In my family there are four people: my parents, my brother Mattia and me. My brother his 11 years old and he goes to the secondary school in Pedavena.
I'm very frindly, because I like to meet or have contacts with my friends. If I can't meet my friends I have contacts with our them on the social network for example Facebook, or I send them a text message (with my mobile phone)
I have played rugby for 3 years: I enjoyed it and I'm good at it! Sometimes I play football with my friends, too, but only with our, not in a team.
I don't have any specific working experience, but I give my contribution in the family activities every day, for example i cook for my family and I'm good at it.

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Hi, my name is Daniel, and I'm 16 years old.
I live with my family in Pedavena, a small town near Feltre, in the province territory of Belluno, in the north-east of Italy.
In my family there are four people: my parents, my brother Mattia and me. My brother has iss11 years old and he goes to the secondary school in Pedavena.
I'm very friendly, because I like to meet or have contacts with my friends. If I can't meet my friends I have contacts with them on the social network Facebook, or I send them a text message (with my mobile phone)
I have played rugby for 3 years: I enjoy it and I'm good at it! Sometimes I play football with my friends, too, but not in a team.
I don't have any specific working experience, but I give my contribution in the family activities every day, for example I cook for my family and I'm good at it.

Adam

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my name is Adam and  I'm 17. I live with my family in Villaga, a hamlet of village near Feltre. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like play a lot of sport, for example such as football, basketball, and volleyball and in my free time i go running or cycling. I'm cheerfull, helpfull and above all hard-working. I have a lot of some working experience: for example last summer i worked in a restaurant as a waiter. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. I did can also do some a lot of manual works: i help my father to cut wood or make hay. I can speak Itlian, English and a little bit of German. My favourite scool subject are maths, science and philosophy.

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my name is Adam and  I'm 17. I live with my family in Villaga, a village near Feltre. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like playing a lot of sport, such as football, basketball, and volleyball and in my free time i go running or cycling. I'm cheerfull, helpfull and above all hard-working. I have some working experience: last summer I worked in a restaurant as a waiter. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. I can also do some manual works: I help my father to cut wood or make hay. I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of German. My favourite school subject are maths, science and philosophy.

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Hi, 
my name is Adam and  I'm 17. I live with my family in Villaga, a village near Feltre. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like playing a lot of sport, such as football, basketball, and volleyball and in my free time I go running or cycling. I'm cheerful, helpful and above all hard-working. I have some working experience: last summer I worked in a restaurant as a waiter. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. I can also do some manual works: I help my father to cut wood or make hay. I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of German. My favourite school subject are maths, science and philosophy.

Marino Taita

Hi, my name is Marino,  I’m sixteen years old and  live in Rasai , a small village near Feltre. Feltre is ... (location) I’m really friendly, ... (more about your personality) I can speak Italian and also Spanish because my mum is from south America. I’m good at cooking but I don’t have any working experience. I play basketball in a team and I love all kinds of music like: Pop, Classical, Jazz or Raggae . My favorite singer is ray Charles, he was a pioneer in the genre of  Soul music.

Simone Triches

Hi!
my name is Simone Triches, I'm 16 years old and live in Belluno, which is a small town in the north east of Italy, near the Dolomite Mountains.
I attend the a high school in called Giorgio dal Piaz in feltre, some 30 kilometres from where I live. I like the scientific subjects very much , expecially chemistry. I can speak Italian, English and a bit of French. I can also ... and I am good at ... (other abilities) In my free time, I usually drawing, read some books or listening to music. I am a reliable, outgoing and hard worker working. I have already had some working experience, and I worked as a waiter in a pizza house restaurant.

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Hi!
my name is Simone Triches, I'm 16 years old and live in Belluno, which is a small town in the north east of Italy, near the Dolomite Mountains.
I attend a high school called Giorgio dal Piaz in Feltre, some 30 kilometres from where I live. I like scientific subjects very much , expecially chemistry and biology. I can speak Italian, English and a bit of French. I can also cook some simple food, but I learn quickly, so I think that I will would be able to cook evrything. I'm good at manual work, too: I know how to repare some things or make objects with wood.  In my free time, I usually draw, read some books or listen to music. I am  reliable, outgoing and hard working. I have some working experience, I worked as a waiter in a pizza restaurant.

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Hello! my name is Davide Riva, I'm 16. I live in Pez with my family. Pez is a small village near Cesio, in the north east of Italy. I'm funny, friendly, cheerful and reabile reliable. I'm a student and I study in Feltre at 'Liceo Giorgio Dal Piaz'. I play football for ' Plavis', that is a team which plays in Santa Giustina, some ten minutes drive from where I live. I haven't got sny any working experience but I'm good at manual works so I'm hard-working and I do the best I can. I can also ... (something more about your skills) and I like ...

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Hello! my name is Davide Riva, I'm 16. I live in Pez with my family. Pez is a small village near Cesio, in the north east of Italy. I'm funny, friendly, cheerful and reliable. I'm a student and I study in Feltre at 'Liceo Giorgio Dal Piaz'. I play football for ' Plavis', that is a team which plays in Santa Giustina, some ten minutes drive from where I live. I haven't got any working experience but I'm good at manual works so I'm hard-working and I do the best I can. I can also play football, do manual working.I like watching televison, play computer, play football and running.    

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Marco Munerol

Hi, my name is Marco, i'm sixteen and i live in Rasai, a village in the north-east of italy. I'm a student at a high school in Feltre, i attend the applied sciences department.

I'm friendly and amusing, i have played football with "RIPA", a football team, for eight years and my hobby is playing the drums, it'a a fantastic instrument!

I don't have any working experiences with a regular contract but every weekend i help my dad with his works.

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Hi, my name is Marco, I'm sixteen and I live in Rasai, a village in the north-east of Italy. I'm a student at a high school in Feltre, I attend the applied sciences department.

I'm friendly and amusing, I have played football with "RIPA", a football team, for eight years and my hobby is playing the drums, it'a a fantastic instrument!
I can speak three different languages: Italian, English and a little French.

I don't have any working experiences with a regular contract but every weekend I help my dad with his works, he is an electrician, so i'm learning something about it. Also,i can cook simple dishes, for example pasta, pizza or meat and i'm good at manual works, like woodcutter and painter woodcutting and painting.

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Valentino Condoluci

Hi guys!
I teach ICT at Liceo "Giorgio Dal Piaz" and I.I.S. "Negrelli-Forcellini" in Feltre.
In my free time I also play trombone, guitar, voice, ...
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Nicola Brandalise

Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small country village near the a lake with my family. Rocca is ... (geographical position) I attend the liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz, it's a high school. My favorite subjects are history, philosophy and science. I can speak italian, french and english. I like play football with my friend, but i don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, infact i went have been to ... (name of stadium) the stadium many times.  I don't have a real working experiences in the work, but in the summer, when I have a some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.

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Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play a the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.

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Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.

Lorenzo Zannin

Hi, my name is Lorenzo Z., I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo: a small villege in the North-East of Italy. I attend the third year in a high school called Liceo G. Dal Piaz.
I'm reliable, hard-working and I learn fast.
I can speak English and a little of Franch. I can also .... and I am good at ... I've already had I have some working experiences: behind the bar in a cafè and in a restaurant's kitcken inside a restaurant.
I love music and scientific subjects but I can also write very well and I never mind am willing to do manual works.

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Hi, my name is Lorenzo Z., I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo: a small villege in the North-East of Italy. I attend the third year in a high school called Liceo G. Dal Piaz.
I'm reliable, hard-working and I learn fast.
I can speak English and a little of French. I can also cook and I am good at painting. I have some working experiences: behind the bar in a cafè and in a kitcken inside a restaurant.
I love music and scientific subjects but I can also write very well and I am willing to do manual works.

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Andrea Fusinato

My name is Andrea Fusinato. I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo with my family. Sospirolo is a small village near the mountains, situated located in the north-east of Italy. I attend the third class in a High School called ''Liceo G. Dal Piaz''.
I am outgoing, reliable and a hard worker. I haven't already had don't have any working experience, but I can learn fast and I pledge much commit myself a lot in what I have to do. I can speak italian, english and a bit of french. I can also ... and I am good at ... In my free time I usually play basketball, go running or listening to music.

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My name is Andrea Fusinato. I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo, a small village near the mountains, located in the north-east of Italy, with my family. I attend the third class in a High School called ''Liceo G. Dal Piaz''. I am outgoing, reliable and a hard worker. I don't have any working experience, but I can learn fast and I commit myself a lot in what I have to do. I can speak Italian, English and a bit of French. I can also play the guitar, use the computer, cook and I am good at school. In my free time I usually play basketball, go running or listen to music.

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Alessandro dalla Rosa

Hi, my name is Alessandro and I'm 17. I live in Feltre with my family. Feltre is a little small city town in veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like play basketball and I do that three times a week. I have no experience in the work's working world but I'm outgoing and reliable.  I sometimes help my grandfather to cut wood or working in the fields: I'm doing making some experience with him and now I am quite good at it. 
My favorite subject at school is History. I know an archaeologist and he told me a lot of things of about his work job Every time I remain that fascinated me, especially because he travels the world a lot and he meets an incredible variety of  so many different people.


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Hi, my name is Alessandro and I'm 17. I live in Feltre with my family. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like playing basketball and I do that three times a week. I have no experience in the working world but I'm outgoing and reliable. I sometimes help my grandfather to cut wood or working in the fields: I'm making some experience with him and now I am quite good at it.

I am also good at cooking because I help my mum to do cook dinner when she hasn't got much time. I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of German.

My favorite subject at school is History. I know an archaeologist and he told me a lot of things about his job  that fascinated me, especially because he travels  a lot and he meets so many different people.

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Elisa Moretta

Hi, my name is Elisa and I'm fifteen. I live in Sovramonte with my dad and my younger sister. Sovramonte is a small village situated located in the North-East of Italy. I'm very outgoing, cheerful, patient, avaible helpful and above all hard-working.
I can work as a waitress: I can clear and lay the tables, see the guest to the table and do the washing-up in the kitchen. In fact I have some experience in working in a restaurant with a lot of people a day: because I worked in a restaurant I have done that for three summers.
I really loved it because it made me grow up and improve my skills mentally and as a person, also if even though it has been was difficult at the beginning!

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Hi, my name is Elisa and I'm fifteen. I live in Sovramonte with my dad and my younger sister. Sovramonte is a small village located in the North-East of Italy. I'm very outgoing, cheerful, patient, helpful and above all hard-working.
I can work as a waitress: I can clear and lay the tables, see the guest to the table and do the washing-up in the kitchen. I also can can also take orders from the table and entertain guests. I'm good at cash up at the and of the day  too, in fact I have some experience in working in a restaurant with a lot of people a day: I have done that for three summers.
I really loved it even though it was difficult at the beginning, because it made me grow up and improve my skills: even if it's also when some work is not part of my duty, but I can learn very fast and I do the best I can in all things I do!,  ,



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Dear Linda...

Dear Linda,
I'm writing you to replay you about to your letter. I usually haven' t got much a lot of time to go shopping but when I can I usually go far from Feltre and I always spend a lot of money. I like buying a lot of things but when I buy go to clothes and or shoe shops I'm very happy. They are my best sort of the shops I like best because I always find something to buy and you can rarely there are see ugly items bad things. I enjoy shopping when I go to shops with my aunt because she is very friendly and generous and she buys me whatever I want.
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                        Valentina
Dear Linda,
I'm writing  to reply to your letter. I haven' t got much  time to go shopping but when I can I usually go far from Feltre and I always spend a lot of money. I like buying a lot of things but when I  go to clothes and or shoe shops I'm very happy. They are the shops I like best because I always find something to buy and you can rarely  see ugly items . I enjoy shopping when I go to shops with my aunt because she is very friendly and generous and she buys me whatever I want.
Write soon
                        Valentina



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Gabriele Walicki

Hi!
My name is Gabriele, I'm sixteen and I live in Sospirolo.
My passions are cycling, photography and the mountains.
I go to attend the third year of in a high school called .... . I'm in the applied sciences department.

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Hi!
My name is Gabriele Walicki, I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo with my family (location).
I attend the third year in a high school called Liceo Dal Piaz in Feltre, I'm in the applied sciences department.
My hobbies are photography and the mouintains, i usually go climbing when I have some free time.

I also practise cycling in Ponzano Veneto, about an hour drive from where I live, with a team called Bianchin-Marchiol.
I can also play the guitar, use the computer and speak Italian, Polish, some English and French.
I've have a friendly and expansive outgoing character and I like meet new people.
(working experience) In the future I'll be a professional biker or a photographer.

 

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Lorenzo Budel

Hi ! My name is Lorenzo, I' m 16 years old and I attend the third class in a High School called Liceo Dal Piaz, in Feltre. My hobbies are listening to music, playing with videogames and watching football matches. I'm friendly, reliable and I love meet new people. I' m a goalkeeper in a team named Plavis, which is the name of a local association, too. I love travelling : I have been in big cities like London, Barcelona, Munich, Rome and Milan and in other. I can speak English,Spanish and I am very good at sports. In the future I will travel to the USA because I love that country for football, basketball and for its culture. I haven' t got any working experiences but I do the best I can in everything I do.

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Hi ! My name is Lorenzo, I' m 16 years old and I attend the third class in a High School called Liceo Dal Piaz, in Feltre. My hobbies are listening to music, playing  videogames and watching football matches. I'm friendly, reliable and I love meeting new people. I' m a goalkeeper in a team named Plavis, which is the name of a local association, too. I love travelling: I have been in big cities like London, Barcelona, Munich, Rome and  Milan. I can speak English, Spanish and I am very good at sports. In the future I will travel to the USA because I love that country for football, basketball and for its culture. I haven' t got any working experiences but I do the best I can in everything I do.

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Valentina Faoro

My name is Valentina Faoro I live in Feltre with my mother , my father and my sister. Feltre is a small city town in the Nort-East of Italy. I study in a High School called ''Giorgio Dal Piaz''. I'm outgoing, reliable and hard -working. I can speak Italian, English and I understand a little French.  I also have some working experience: This last summer I worked in a Pizzeria pizza restaurant as a waiteress. I like working whith people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. In my free time I like playing football. I'm a defender in a team named Dynamo Vellai. I like listening to music and playing computer games.

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My name is Valentina Faoro and I'm 16 years old. I study in a High School called ''Giorgio Dal Piaz''. I'm outgoing, reliable and hard -working. I can speak Italian, English and I understand a little French. I can ...., too, and I am good at ...... I also have some working experience: lasat summer I worked in a pizza restaurant as a waiteress. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can.

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My name is Valentina Faoro and I'm 16 years old. I study in a High School called ''Giorgio Dal Piaz''. I'm outgoing, generous,sensible, reliable and hard-working. I can speak Italian, English and I understand a little French. I can  learn fast, too, and I am good at sports: I play football in a team called "Vellai". I also have some working experience: last summer I worked in a pizza restaurant as a waiteress.  I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can.

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Alessia Lanciato

My name is Alessia, I am 15 years old, almost sixteen. I attend the high school ‘Giorgio Dal Piaz’ in Feltre, a small city town in the province territory of Belluno, in the north-east of Italy.
I have two sisters, Aurora and Giorgia, they are my life. 
I have a lot of hobbies and I practice do many sports. For example, in October I’m going to start a course of arbitrators to become a football referee in Belluno. I also play volleyball and I go to run running over the weekend. 
Last and this summer I worked for to earn some money, and I'm going to do the same next summer: (WHAT DID YOU DO?)
After the When I finish secondary school I’ll want to go to the Air Academy in Pisa:
in the future I hope I will become an pilot's airline an airline pilot. This is my dream, but if the things won’t go as I would like (BETTER: ...but if it won't come true, ...), I know that I’ll adapt have another job.

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My name is Alessia, I am 15 years old, almost sixteen. I attend high school ‘Giorgio Dal Piaz’ in Feltre, a small town in the province territory of Belluno, in the north-east of Italy.
I have two sisters, Aurora and Giorgia, they are my life. 
I have a lot of hobbies and I do many sports. For example, in October I’m going to start a course to become a football referee in Belluno. I also play volleyball and I go running over the weekend. 
Last summer I worked to earn some monney, and I'm going to do the same next summer. I worked as a waitress and as babysitter.
I am outing, hard working and patient.
When I finish secondary school I want to go to the Air Academy in Pisa:
in the future I hope I will become an airline pilot. This is my dream, but if it won't come true as I would like I know that I’ll have another job.

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Matteo Boschet

My name is Matteo Boschet i'm sixteen. I study at Liceo scientifico in Feltre (location).  I like football and music, in fact I play ..... My favourite group is .........
I'm friendly and I'm hard worker  working.
I don't have any working experience, but I can .... I am also good at ... I would like ...

LEAVE THE ORIGINAL PARAGRAPH AS IT IS NOW AND RE-WRITE A NEW PARAGRAPH, ON THIS PAGE, WITHOUT MISTAKES AND WITH MORE INFORMATION ON YOUR PERSONALITY AND YOUR ABILITIES, ( I AM GOOD AT ... I CAN ...).

DEADLINE: 24TH OCTOBER 5.00 PM

My name is Matteo Boschet, I'm sixteen. I live in Pedavena with my family. Pedavena is a small town in the North East of Italy.

I study at "Liceo Scientifico" in Feltre, near Pedavena.  I like music and football, in fact I play with "Union Ripa la Fenadora" which is the team of my town. My favourite football team is Milan.

I'm friendly, I'm hard working, and I'm reliable.

I don't have any working experience, but I can do many some manual work, for example, I can ....(?). In the future I would like to work in a coffee bar because it would give me the oppurtunity to learn more about.

PLEASE CORRECT AND COMPLETE YOUR PARAGRAPH (RE-WRITE A NEW PARAGRAPH ON THIS PAGE)

DEADLINE: SATURDAY 3RD NOVEMBER 5.00 PM

My name is Matteo Boschet, I'm sixteen. I live in Pedavena with my family. Pedavena is a small town in the North East of Italy.

I study at "Liceo Scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz" in Feltre, near Pedavena.  I like music and football, in fact I play with "Union Ripa la Fenadora" which is the team of my town. My favourite football team is Milan.

I'm friendly, I'm hard working, and I'm reliable.

I don't have any working experience, but I can do some manual work, for example, I can paint . In the future I would like to work in a coffee bar because it would give me the oppurtunity to learn more about and I like working with people.

Job Details

To start with, each student is required to write their profile in English as if they had to apply for a job: name, age, personality, abilities, working experiences – no other personal data.

Deadline: Monday 22^nd October.

Assessment will be based on: accuracy, language propriety, on time uploading, on time corrections.

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Here is the link to find the text we worked on last week, a real job offer: [[snagajob.com]]

Giovanna Zancanaro

My name is Giovanna Zancanaro, I teach English in a secondary school called Liceo G. Dal Piaz.
The school is located in Feltre, in the north-east of Italy, within the province territory of Belluno, close to the Dolomite mountains.
Students are aged 14-18 and attend different departments - science, applied sciences, humanities or languages oriented.

This blog has been created for the students of class 3B – applied sciences, school year 2012-13, at Liceo G. Dal Piaz in Feltre, Belluno.

The aim is to work in an inter-disciplinary way on English, ICT, Science and any other subjects should join.