Alessandro dalla Rosa

Hi, my name is Alessandro and I'm 17. I live in Feltre with my family. Feltre is a little small city town in veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like play basketball and I do that three times a week. I have no experience in the work's working world but I'm outgoing and reliable.  I sometimes help my grandfather to cut wood or working in the fields: I'm doing making some experience with him and now I am quite good at it. 
My favorite subject at school is History. I know an archaeologist and he told me a lot of things of about his work job Every time I remain that fascinated me, especially because he travels the world a lot and he meets an incredible variety of  so many different people.


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Hi, my name is Alessandro and I'm 17. I live in Feltre with my family. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like playing basketball and I do that three times a week. I have no experience in the working world but I'm outgoing and reliable. I sometimes help my grandfather to cut wood or working in the fields: I'm making some experience with him and now I am quite good at it.

I am also good at cooking because I help my mum to do cook dinner when she hasn't got much time. I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of German.

My favorite subject at school is History. I know an archaeologist and he told me a lot of things about his job  that fascinated me, especially because he travels  a lot and he meets so many different people.

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