I can work as a waitress: I can clear and lay the tables, see the guest to the table and do the washing-up in the kitchen. In fact I have some experience in working in a restaurant with a lot of people a day:
I really loved it because it made me grow up and improve my skills
LEAVE THE ORIGINAL PARAGRAPH AS IT IS NOW AND RE-WRITE A NEW PARAGRAPH, ON THIS PAGE, WITHOUT MISTAKES AND, POSSIBLY, WITH SOME MORE INFORMATION ON YOUR ABILITIES ( I AM ALSO GOOD AT ... I CAN ...).
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Hi, my name is Elisa and I'm fifteen. I live in Sovramonte with my dad and my younger sister. Sovramonte is a small village located in the North-East of Italy. I'm very outgoing, cheerful, patient, helpful and above all hard-working.
I can work as a waitress: I can clear and lay the tables, see the guest to the table and do the washing-up in the kitchen. I
I really loved it even though it was difficult at the beginning, because it made me grow up and improve my skills:
I MOVED SOME SENTENCES IN BETTER PLACES
TAKE NOTES OF MY LAST CORRECTIONS, THEN IT'S OK
GZ
sorry prof, does "take notes of my last corrections" means that I have to copy without errors or that it's ok?? =)
ReplyDeleteIt means look, write notes (what you need to remember) on your notebook and keep them in mind:)!
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