Valentina Faoro

My name is Valentina Faoro I live in Feltre with my mother , my father and my sister. Feltre is a small city town in the Nort-East of Italy. I study in a High School called ''Giorgio Dal Piaz''. I'm outgoing, reliable and hard -working. I can speak Italian, English and I understand a little French.  I also have some working experience: This last summer I worked in a Pizzeria pizza restaurant as a waiteress. I like working whith people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. In my free time I like playing football. I'm a defender in a team named Dynamo Vellai. I like listening to music and playing computer games.

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My name is Valentina Faoro and I'm 16 years old. I study in a High School called ''Giorgio Dal Piaz''. I'm outgoing, reliable and hard -working. I can speak Italian, English and I understand a little French. I can ...., too, and I am good at ...... I also have some working experience: lasat summer I worked in a pizza restaurant as a waiteress. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can.

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My name is Valentina Faoro and I'm 16 years old. I study in a High School called ''Giorgio Dal Piaz''. I'm outgoing, generous,sensible, reliable and hard-working. I can speak Italian, English and I understand a little French. I can  learn fast, too, and I am good at sports: I play football in a team called "Vellai". I also have some working experience: last summer I worked in a pizza restaurant as a waiteress.  I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can.

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