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Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also playa the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.
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Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.
Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.
PLEASE CORRECT THE MISTAKE YOU LEFT AND TAKE NOTES OF MY CORRECTIONS
GZ
Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.
Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz, it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play a acoustic guitar for a year.
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