ADAM

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

This morning, i came to school with my new friend Tom. He is 16 years old and he came here for the class exchange. he come from Germany and he study at the a high school of in Berlin. When i enter in the class with my new friend Tom, all of my class came around us and all asked  me who is he. In the begining he loocked very timid but in the end he make frinds with all. when the teacher came in the class he sat in the empty desk near mine and I had the possibility to know him better (if he is here for the exchange don't you have more time to get to know him at your home?).

CORREZIONE:                          A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

This morning, I came to the class with my new friend Tom. He is 16 years old and he came here for the class exchange. He comes from Germany and he studies at a high school in Berlin. When I come into the class with Tom, all of my class came around us and all asked me about Tom. He looked very shy but in the end he made a lot of friends. In the afternoon I take he to visit Feltre and Belluno and he said that Italy is a very nice country. Now the exchange is finished but I continue hear from he by e-mail or by telephone.

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CORREZIONE:                          A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL


This morning, I came to the class with my new friend Tom. He is 16 years old and he came here for the class exchange. He cames from Germany and he studies at a high school in Berlin. When I came into the class with Tom, everybody came around us and all asked me about him. He looked very shy but in the end he made a lot of friends. In the afternoon I took him to visit Feltre and Belluno and he said that Italy is a very nice country. Now the exchange is finished but I keep learning him by e-mail or by telephone.

words: 110