A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL
He arrived at school three weeks ago.
He come from Manchester and he went in Italy because his father work. His Father was the owner of an important timber trade company.
In three days all the school knew him, he was very popular. But there was some people that like him and some other people that hate him, not for any valid reasons, only because he was a rich stranger.
In particular Anselmo, a poor boy that live in a farm with his grand-parents, hated him; and a morning, Anselmo attak the stranger, and putted him into a gelid river. The day after the stranger's body was founded, and luckily the police discovered the culprit. After that, Anselmo only said : "I did it beacause I was envious."
Such bad beast the envy is.






Correzione:
A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL
He arrived at school three weeks ago.
He came from Manchester and he went to Italy because his father's work. His father was the owner of an important timber trade company.
In three days all the school knew him, he was very popular. But some people liked him and some other didn't, not for valid reasons, only because he was a rich stranger.
In particular Anselmo, a poor boy that lives in a farm with his grand-parents, hated him; and one morning, Anselmo attaked the stranger, and put him into a gelid river. The day after the stranger's body was found, and luckily the police discovered the culprit. After that, Anselmo only said : "I did it beacause I was envious." Such bad beast the envy is.

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