Monday, December 10, 2012

lorenzo b.


                                                                                                                  Via ....... n....
                                                                                                                  32032 Feltre,
                                                                                                                  Belluno, Italy

                                                                                        Monday, 10th December 2012

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    
Hi Linda,
Thanks for your letter. How are you?

Yes I do, I love shopping, because it is a good thing for your free time.

My favorite shops are sports stores and technology stores. In these stores There I spent spend a lot of time because sport and technology are my favorite passions.
In The sports shops I usually buy a pair of shoes for football and for my freetime free time. In technology shops I can choose my ideal mobile phone and mac.

I also like to enter in go into a clockwork watchmaker's shop, where you can see a lot of watches, chronometers and more other things for men.

It's all for now,
please write soon, thanks again
                                    Lorenzo.


PLEASE NOTE THAT I CHANGED THE POSITION OF SOME SENTENCES AND THE PARAGRAPH DIVISION
 
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  1. UnknownDecember 10, 2012 at 5:08 PM

    CORRECTED, PLEASE HAVE A LOOK

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  2. UnknownDecember 10, 2012 at 6:00 PM

    We don't write any detailed address in the blog, ok?
    I didn't ask to re-write the letter this time because I am making all the corrections and I would like all students in your class to have a look at them. So, all you have to do is take notes of your mistakes not to repeat them and read your friends' letters.
    See you at school.

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