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32034 Pedavena
Belluno Italy
Mon. 10thof Dec. 2012
32034 Pedavena
Belluno Italy
Mon. 10th
Dear Linda
Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to reply to you.
I like going shopping because when I do that I canspent spend more some time with my friends. We usually go at to clothes shops and we try many clothes on, but sometimes we don't buy anything. My favourite shop is a shoe shop, because I love shoes, but I also like clothes shops.
My town is small and there aren't many shops, so when I go shopping with my family
we sometimes goat to Treviso because it's bigger than Feltre and there are a lot of shops with more brands than you can find here.
Hope to hear from you soon,
Matteo
MATTEO PLEASE NOTE THAT I CHANGED THE POSITION OF SOME SENTENCES AND THE PARAGRAPH DIVISION
Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to reply to you.
I like going shopping because when I do that I can
My town is small and there aren't many shops, so when I go shopping with my family
we sometimes go
Hope to hear from you soon,
Matteo
MATTEO PLEASE NOTE THAT I CHANGED THE POSITION OF SOME SENTENCES AND THE PARAGRAPH DIVISION
CORRECTED, PLEASE HAVE A LOOK
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