Mattia

Hi, my name is Mattia Gaio and I'm sixteen. I live with my family in Seren del Grappa, a small town big village near not far from Belluno, in the North-East of Italy, . I attend in a scientific school called Liceo Scientifico dal Piaz, in Feltre. I like football and music, and my favourite football club is Milan. Last year I played football, in a team (?) but I had to stop because of an injury, so now I go to a gym to keep fit.
I don't have some any working esperience, but I can do some work in electronics, and I sometimes help my dad in the garden works. I can't cook.
In      free time I often play football with my friends or I listen to music.

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Hi, my name is Mattia Gaio and I'm sixteen. I live with my family in Seren del Grappa, a big village not far from Belluno, in the North-East of Italy, in Veneto. I attend a scientific school called Liceo Scientifico dal Piaz, in Feltre. I like football and music, and my favourite football club is Milan. Last year I played football in a team called Union Ripa la Fenadora, but I had to stop because of an injury, so now I go to a gym to keep fit.
I'm friendly, reliable and calm, and also a hard worker.
I don't have any working esperiences, but I can do some work in electronics, and I sometimes help my dad in the garden works. I can't cook, but I can speak three different languages: Italian, English and a bit of French. In the future I would like to became a doctor, but the road is very long.
In my free time I often play football with my friends or I listen to music.

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Daniel

Hi, my name is Daniel, and I'm 16 years old.
I live with my family in Pedavena, a small town near Feltre, in the province territory of Belluno, in the north-east of Italy.
In my family there are four people: my parents, my brother Mattia and me. My brother his 11 years old and he goes to the secondary school in Pedavena.
I'm very frindly, because I like to meet or have contacts with my friends. If I can't meet my friends I have contacts with our them on the social network for example Facebook, or I send them a text message (with my mobile phone)
I have played rugby for 3 years: I enjoyed it and I'm good at it! Sometimes I play football with my friends, too, but only with our, not in a team.
I don't have any specific working experience, but I give my contribution in the family activities every day, for example i cook for my family and I'm good at it.

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Hi, my name is Daniel, and I'm 16 years old.
I live with my family in Pedavena, a small town near Feltre, in the province territory of Belluno, in the north-east of Italy.
In my family there are four people: my parents, my brother Mattia and me. My brother has iss11 years old and he goes to the secondary school in Pedavena.
I'm very friendly, because I like to meet or have contacts with my friends. If I can't meet my friends I have contacts with them on the social network Facebook, or I send them a text message (with my mobile phone)
I have played rugby for 3 years: I enjoy it and I'm good at it! Sometimes I play football with my friends, too, but not in a team.
I don't have any specific working experience, but I give my contribution in the family activities every day, for example I cook for my family and I'm good at it.

Adam

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my name is Adam and  I'm 17. I live with my family in Villaga, a hamlet of village near Feltre. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like play a lot of sport, for example such as football, basketball, and volleyball and in my free time i go running or cycling. I'm cheerfull, helpfull and above all hard-working. I have a lot of some working experience: for example last summer i worked in a restaurant as a waiter. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. I did can also do some a lot of manual works: i help my father to cut wood or make hay. I can speak Itlian, English and a little bit of German. My favourite scool subject are maths, science and philosophy.

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my name is Adam and  I'm 17. I live with my family in Villaga, a village near Feltre. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like playing a lot of sport, such as football, basketball, and volleyball and in my free time i go running or cycling. I'm cheerfull, helpfull and above all hard-working. I have some working experience: last summer I worked in a restaurant as a waiter. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. I can also do some manual works: I help my father to cut wood or make hay. I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of German. My favourite school subject are maths, science and philosophy.

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Hi, 
my name is Adam and  I'm 17. I live with my family in Villaga, a village near Feltre. Feltre is a small  town in Veneto, a regional area in the north-east of Italy. I like playing a lot of sport, such as football, basketball, and volleyball and in my free time I go running or cycling. I'm cheerful, helpful and above all hard-working. I have some working experience: last summer I worked in a restaurant as a waiter. I like working with people and when people tell me to do something I do the best I can. I can also do some manual works: I help my father to cut wood or make hay. I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of German. My favourite school subject are maths, science and philosophy.

Marino Taita

Hi, my name is Marino,  I’m sixteen years old and  live in Rasai , a small village near Feltre. Feltre is ... (location) I’m really friendly, ... (more about your personality) I can speak Italian and also Spanish because my mum is from south America. I’m good at cooking but I don’t have any working experience. I play basketball in a team and I love all kinds of music like: Pop, Classical, Jazz or Raggae . My favorite singer is ray Charles, he was a pioneer in the genre of  Soul music.

Simone Triches

Hi!
my name is Simone Triches, I'm 16 years old and live in Belluno, which is a small town in the north east of Italy, near the Dolomite Mountains.
I attend the a high school in called Giorgio dal Piaz in feltre, some 30 kilometres from where I live. I like the scientific subjects very much , expecially chemistry. I can speak Italian, English and a bit of French. I can also ... and I am good at ... (other abilities) In my free time, I usually drawing, read some books or listening to music. I am a reliable, outgoing and hard worker working. I have already had some working experience, and I worked as a waiter in a pizza house restaurant.

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Hi!
my name is Simone Triches, I'm 16 years old and live in Belluno, which is a small town in the north east of Italy, near the Dolomite Mountains.
I attend a high school called Giorgio dal Piaz in Feltre, some 30 kilometres from where I live. I like scientific subjects very much , expecially chemistry and biology. I can speak Italian, English and a bit of French. I can also cook some simple food, but I learn quickly, so I think that I will would be able to cook evrything. I'm good at manual work, too: I know how to repare some things or make objects with wood.  In my free time, I usually draw, read some books or listen to music. I am  reliable, outgoing and hard working. I have some working experience, I worked as a waiter in a pizza restaurant.

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Davide

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Hello! my name is Davide Riva, I'm 16. I live in Pez with my family. Pez is a small village near Cesio, in the north east of Italy. I'm funny, friendly, cheerful and reabile reliable. I'm a student and I study in Feltre at 'Liceo Giorgio Dal Piaz'. I play football for ' Plavis', that is a team which plays in Santa Giustina, some ten minutes drive from where I live. I haven't got sny any working experience but I'm good at manual works so I'm hard-working and I do the best I can. I can also ... (something more about your skills) and I like ...

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Hello! my name is Davide Riva, I'm 16. I live in Pez with my family. Pez is a small village near Cesio, in the north east of Italy. I'm funny, friendly, cheerful and reliable. I'm a student and I study in Feltre at 'Liceo Giorgio Dal Piaz'. I play football for ' Plavis', that is a team which plays in Santa Giustina, some ten minutes drive from where I live. I haven't got any working experience but I'm good at manual works so I'm hard-working and I do the best I can. I can also play football, do manual working.I like watching televison, play computer, play football and running.    

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Marco Munerol

Hi, my name is Marco, i'm sixteen and i live in Rasai, a village in the north-east of italy. I'm a student at a high school in Feltre, i attend the applied sciences department.

I'm friendly and amusing, i have played football with "RIPA", a football team, for eight years and my hobby is playing the drums, it'a a fantastic instrument!

I don't have any working experiences with a regular contract but every weekend i help my dad with his works.

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Hi, my name is Marco, I'm sixteen and I live in Rasai, a village in the north-east of Italy. I'm a student at a high school in Feltre, I attend the applied sciences department.

I'm friendly and amusing, I have played football with "RIPA", a football team, for eight years and my hobby is playing the drums, it'a a fantastic instrument!
I can speak three different languages: Italian, English and a little French.

I don't have any working experiences with a regular contract but every weekend I help my dad with his works, he is an electrician, so i'm learning something about it. Also,i can cook simple dishes, for example pasta, pizza or meat and i'm good at manual works, like woodcutter and painter woodcutting and painting.

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Valentino Condoluci

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I teach ICT at Liceo "Giorgio Dal Piaz" and I.I.S. "Negrelli-Forcellini" in Feltre.
In my free time I also play trombone, guitar, voice, ...
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Nicola Brandalise

Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small country village near the a lake with my family. Rocca is ... (geographical position) I attend the liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz, it's a high school. My favorite subjects are history, philosophy and science. I can speak italian, french and english. I like play football with my friend, but i don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, infact i went have been to ... (name of stadium) the stadium many times.  I don't have a real working experiences in the work, but in the summer, when I have a some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.

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Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play a the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.

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Hi, my name is Nicola B., I'm seventeen years old. I live in Rocca, a small village near a lake with my family. Rocca is in the north east of Italy. I attend "liceo scientifico Giorgio dal Piaz", it's a high school. My favourite subjecs are history, philosophy and science. I can speak Italian, French and English. I like play football with my friends, but I don't play in a team. My favourite football team is A.C Milan, in fact I have been to San Siro stadium many times. I can also play the acoustic guitar: I have done that for a year.
I'm reliable and I learn fast. I don't have real working experiences, but in the summer, when I have some free time, I usually help my father with his work, he is an electrician.

Lorenzo Zannin

Hi, my name is Lorenzo Z., I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo: a small villege in the North-East of Italy. I attend the third year in a high school called Liceo G. Dal Piaz.
I'm reliable, hard-working and I learn fast.
I can speak English and a little of Franch. I can also .... and I am good at ... I've already had I have some working experiences: behind the bar in a cafè and in a restaurant's kitcken inside a restaurant.
I love music and scientific subjects but I can also write very well and I never mind am willing to do manual works.

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Hi, my name is Lorenzo Z., I'm 16 years old and I live in Sospirolo: a small villege in the North-East of Italy. I attend the third year in a high school called Liceo G. Dal Piaz.
I'm reliable, hard-working and I learn fast.
I can speak English and a little of French. I can also cook and I am good at painting. I have some working experiences: behind the bar in a cafè and in a kitcken inside a restaurant.
I love music and scientific subjects but I can also write very well and I am willing to do manual works.

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