Simone

Via ................ n. ....

32032 Feltre

Belluno Italy

10th Dec. 2012 

Dear Linda,
It's always nice to hear from you.
In your last letter you asked me if I liked going to shops, and to what kind in particular.Well, like you, I like to go shopping, too. I usually go to a shopping centre with my friends, but I don't always buy things. When I really need to buy something, I usually go to Treviso or Belluno because in Feltre there aren't  many shops.

I like electronics shops best, because I love to have a look at new computers or cell-phones.  What about you? What is your favourite kind of shop? How often do you go shopping?
Please write soon,
love,
Simone

 

 

Simone

Via ................ n. ....

32032 Feltre

Belluno Italy

10th Dec. 2012 

Dear Linda,

it is always nice to hear from you.

the last time In your last letter you asked me if I liked going to shops, and to what kind in particular.Well, like you, I also like to go shopping, too. I usually go to the a shopping centre with my friends, but I don't always buy somethings every time. When I really need want to buy something, I usually go to Treviso or Belluno because in Feltre there aren't lots of many shops.

I prefer the like electronics shops best, because I love to have a look at new computers or cell-phones. and What about you? What is your favourite kind of shop? How often do you go shopping?

Please write me soon,

love,
 
Simone

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