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32032 Feltre,
Belluno, Italy
Monday, 10th December 2012
Dear Linda,
how are you? I'm really happy that you enjoyed it at the shopping mall yesterday! I like going shopping but I have no time little time to do it. I usually go with my parents and my brother, and with him I always find some new videogames.
I like
Please write to me and tell me what you think
Bye for now,
Alessandro
YOU HAD FORGOTTEN PARAGRAPH DIVISION AND THE FINAL CLOSING OF THE LETTER. PLEASE TAKE NOTES OF THE CORRECTIONS
corrected, have a look
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