A new boy arrives at school

About 3 months ago a new student from Argentina came in our school. His name is Marcelo. He is a one year older than me. Just arrived he was very shy but after a short time he has become our friend. He could speak a little Italian, because when he lived in Argentina he had studied the language and attended several courses (with several courses he should speak good, not a little Italian!) in his high school. He is a very athletic guy, in fact he plays football and basketball. Another thing he likes is music of Argentina. He now lives in Fonzaso with his mother, his father and sister.

A new boy arrives at school

About 3 months ago a new student from Argentina came to our school. His name is Marcelo. He is one year older than me. Just arrived he was very shy but after a short time he became a friend. He could speak a little Italian, because when he lived in Argentina he studied the language and attended some courses in his high school. He is a very athletic guy, in fact he plays football and basketball in the team. Another thing he likes is the typical music of Argentina. He now lives in Fonzaso with his mother, father and sister.

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL
He arrived at school three weeks ago.
He come from Manchester and he went in Italy because his father work. His Father was the owner of an important timber trade company.
In three days all the school knew him, he was very popular. But there was some people that like him and some other people that hate him, not for any valid reasons, only because he was a rich stranger.
In particular Anselmo, a poor boy that live in a farm with his grand-parents, hated him; and a morning, Anselmo attak the stranger, and putted him into a gelid river. The day after the stranger's body was founded, and luckily the police discovered the culprit. After that, Anselmo only said : "I did it beacause I was envious."
Such bad beast the envy is.






Correzione:
A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL
He arrived at school three weeks ago.
He came from Manchester and he went to Italy because his father's work. His father was the owner of an important timber trade company.
In three days all the school knew him, he was very popular. But some people liked him and some other didn't, not for valid reasons, only because he was a rich stranger.
In particular Anselmo, a poor boy that lives in a farm with his grand-parents, hated him; and one morning, Anselmo attaked the stranger, and put him into a gelid river. The day after the stranger's body was found, and luckily the police discovered the culprit. After that, Anselmo only said : "I did it beacause I was envious." Such bad beast the envy is.

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ADAM

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

This morning, i came to school with my new friend Tom. He is 16 years old and he came here for the class exchange. he come from Germany and he study at the a high school of in Berlin. When i enter in the class with my new friend Tom, all of my class came around us and all asked  me who is he. In the begining he loocked very timid but in the end he make frinds with all. when the teacher came in the class he sat in the empty desk near mine and I had the possibility to know him better (if he is here for the exchange don't you have more time to get to know him at your home?).

CORREZIONE:                          A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

This morning, I came to the class with my new friend Tom. He is 16 years old and he came here for the class exchange. He comes from Germany and he studies at a high school in Berlin. When I come into the class with Tom, all of my class came around us and all asked me about Tom. He looked very shy but in the end he made a lot of friends. In the afternoon I take he to visit Feltre and Belluno and he said that Italy is a very nice country. Now the exchange is finished but I continue hear from he by e-mail or by telephone.

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CORREZIONE:                          A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL


This morning, I came to the class with my new friend Tom. He is 16 years old and he came here for the class exchange. He cames from Germany and he studies at a high school in Berlin. When I came into the class with Tom, everybody came around us and all asked me about him. He looked very shy but in the end he made a lot of friends. In the afternoon I took him to visit Feltre and Belluno and he said that Italy is a very nice country. Now the exchange is finished but I keep learning him by e-mail or by telephone.

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A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

the first day of the school year a new boy came at my school. When he came inside the class and while the teacher was telling us that he was a new student he seemed very timid. Looking the floor he told us his name and his age:"Hi I'm Nicola and I'm seventeen years old". He said also that he cames from Firenze and now he lives in Feltre because his parents found a better job here. After that I told him that he could take sit at the empy desk near the mine. Now after five months we are good friends and all my family know Nicola. (108)

On first day of the school year a new boy came to my school. When he came inside the class and while the teacher was telling us that he was a new student he looked very shy. Looking at the floor he told us his name and his age:"Hi I'm Nicola and I'm seventeen years old". He also said that he came from Firenze and now he lives in Feltre because his parents found a better job here. After that I told him that he could take sit at the empy desk near mine. Now after five months we are good friends and all my family know Nicola.

Story/ Lorenzo Zannin

It was a beautyful day of october. Withered leaves covered the school garden. I was looking through the window when someone knocked on the door of my class. The head teacher came in. Next to him there was a strange guy: he was quiet tall, thin; he had got black straight hairs and a handsome face whit deep blue eyes. He was called Jeremy Carpenter and  he slowly sat dwon in the empty desk next to mine. He diden't ask me nothing, I din't know what I had to say...

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

It was a beautiful day in October. Withered leaves covered the school garden. I was looking through the window when someone knocked on the door of my class. The head teacher came in. Next to him there was a strange guy: he was quite tall, thin; he had got black straight hair and a handsome face with deep blue eyes. He was called Jeremy Carpenter and he slowly sat down at the empty desk next to mine. He didn't ask me anything, I didn't know what I had to say...




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"A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL"

This week a new boy has arrived in my class. His name is Paolo, he's sixteen and he moved from Brazil because his parents wanted to return where their country of origin.
He knows a bit of Italian because  he sometimes speaks it at home. He also speaks English very easly. He played football with a Brazil team, Cruzeiro, but he is very good also to play volleyball.
Now he lives in a village near mine, Feltre (Feltre is not a village), in the house with his family: his father, his mother, his brother and he.
I hope we will make friends soon.



This week a new boy has arrived in my class. His name is Paolo, he's sixteen and he moved from Brazil because his parents wanted to return to their country of origin.
He knows a bit of Italian because he sometimes speaks it at home. He also speaks English very easly. He played football with a Brazilian team, Cruzeiro, but he is also very good at playing volleyball.
Now he lives in a small town near mine, Feltre, in a big house with his family: his father, his mother and his brother.
I hope we will make friends soon.

"A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL"


This week a new boy has arrived in my class. His name is Paolo, he's sixteen and he moved from Brazil because his parents wanted to return to their country of origin.
He can speak some Italian because he sometimes speaks it at home. He also speaks English very easily. He played football with a Brazilian team, Cruzeiro, but he is also very good at playing volleyball.
Now he lives in a small town near mine, Feltre, in a big house with his family: his father, his mother and his brother.
I hope we will make friends soon.
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Marco - A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

Five days ago a new boy arrived at school, his name is John and he moved from the USA to study, visit Italy and make new experiences.
He has chosen Italy because his parents was born in this country so he has always been interested in learning more about his origins.
I havent't had the possibility to know him well yet but he looks friendly and I'm sure we will make friends soon.
At the moment i can only say  that, obviously, John is very good in English, for this reason he usually  help all we in this subject end we help him in Italian!

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

Five days ago a new boy arrived at school, his name is John and he moved from USA to study, visit Italy and make new experiences.
He has chosen Italy because his parents were born in this country so he has always been interested in learning more about his origins.
I havent't had the possibility to know him well yet but he looks friendly and I'm sure we will make friends soon.
At the moment I can only say  that, obviously, John is very good at English, for this he usually helps all of us in this subject end we help him in Italian!

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A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

Five days ago a new boy arrived at school, his name is John and he moved from the USA to study, visit Italy and make new experiences.
He has chosen Italy because his parents were born in this country so he has always been interested in learning more about his origins.
I haven't had the possibility to get to know him well yet, but he looks friendly and I'm sure we will make friends soon.
At the moment I can only say  that, obviously, John is very good at English, for this reason he usually helps all of us in this subject and we help him in Italian!

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Davide riva

A new boy arrives at school

this morning came to school a new boy. He is Frank. He comes from England and now he lives in Pez, where I live.

Frank has moved because his father found a new job in Belluno. Now he lives near my house a hope that we will become a friends. Frank played football in englan and now he wants play in my football team. Too short! How many words?

This morning at school there was a new guy. It's Frank. He comes from England and now he lives in Pez, where I live. He lives in a little flat near the church. Frank played football in England and now he wants to play in my football team.
 Frank has moved because his father found a new job in Belluno. Before moving his father worked for a company, now he works as a worker.
Tomorrow his family will come to my house for dinner. I think that Frank is a friendly and good-natured boy, I hope that we will become a good friends even if doesn't speak Italian very well. 

Valentina Faoro

A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

Yesterday morning while I was entering in my class I saw a new boy. He is my new school frind. He comes from Torino and now he lives in Feltre because his parents wanted to move from the city to the mountain. His name is Luca and he's 17 years old. He lives not far from me. He is very friendly and I hope that we will became good friends He thinks that he will stay in Feltre just for two years because after the this school he wants to go to the university and then he would like to go abroad to work .

 A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

Yesterday morning while I was going into my class I saw a new boy. He is my new school friend. He comes from Torino and now he lives in Feltre because his parents wanted to move from the city to the mountains. His name is Luca and he's 17 years old. He lives not far from me. He is very friendly and I hope that we will became good friends. He thinks that he will stay in Feltre just for two years because after this school he wants to go to university and then he would like to go abroad to work .

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                                                        A new boy arrived at school

Last week came to my school a new boy. His name is Matthew Thomas. He comes from South Florida in the U.S.A., where he played football with "Bulls of  West Community High Shcool" in Boca Raton, he was a Tight End.
Matthew has moved to Italy because his father was wanted in the U.S.A. by F.B.I. (so?)
He has african origins but he is american. Matthew won many awards for ROOKIE of the year (do you think everybody understands? You need to explain)
Now he lives near my home and I hope to get to know him soon, because he' ll stay here just for a few weeks, and then he will go back to South Florida because where he will attend the a college.





                                                        A new boy arrives at school

Last week a  new boy came to my school . His name is Matthew Thomas. He comes from South Florida in the U.S.A., where he played football with "Bulls of  West Community High Shcool" in Boca Raton, he was a Tight End.
 Matthew has moved to Italy because his father was wanted in the U.S.A. by F.B.I.; a month ago he robbed the White House.
He has African origins but he is American. Matthew won many awards for ROOKIE of the year                  (A rookie is a person in his or her first year of a sport, or someone that is new to a profession, training or activity such as a rookie cop, rookie pilot, a recruit, or occasionally a freshman.).
Now he lives near my home and I hope to get to know him soon, because he' ll stay here just for a few weeks, and then he will go back to South Florida  where he will attend  a college.

                                                          

                                                         A new boy arrives at school

Last week a  new boy came to my school . His name is Matthew Thomas. He comes from South Florida in the U.S.A., where he played football with "Bulls of  West Community High Shcool" in Boca Raton, he was a Tight End.
 Matthew has moved to Italy because his father was wanted in the U.S.A. by F.B.I.; a month ago he robbed in a supermarket.
He has African origins but he is American. Matthew won many awards for ROOKIE of the year                  (A rookie is a person in his or her first year of a sport, or someone that is new to a profession, training or activity such as a rookie cop, rookie pilot, a recruit.).
Now he lives near my home and I hope to get to know him soon, because he' ll stay here just for a few weeks, and then he will go back to South Florida  where he will attend  a college. I interest him because
I'm curious about his history.