A new boy arrives at school

Today there was a surprise a new boy arrives at school, and now he will be part of my class. 
He isn’t Italian but he is American, he comes from Denver, Colorado, he’s name is Joe and he has the same age as me, first impressions he seems friendly. 
He told me that he moved to Italy because his father travels a lot for work, and for this reason he think that he will move to another country in a year. But I hope he stays here for a long time, so we can become friends.


A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL                                          



Today there was a surprise: a new boy arrived at school, and now he will be part of my class. 
He is American, he comes from Denver, Colorado, his name is Joe and he has the same age as me. First impression: he seems friendly. 
He told me that he moved to Italy because his father travels a lot for work, and for this reason he thinks that he will move to another country in a year. But I hope he'll stay here for a long time, so we can become good friends.

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When I returned school after ... (you need to complete), I saw a boy who I didn't know in my class. I asked my friends, and they said me that he called Santiago and he came from Colombia.
My first impression was very good, but I was a bit shy about talk to him because I thought he couldn't speak Italian.
Then, I took heart I took my courage and I went to have acquainted with him. I started speaking very slowly and clearly but he replied me with a perfect Italian and he made me feel ashamed!
All went right and now we're very friends.

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A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

When I returned school after summer holidays, I saw a boy who I didn't know in my class. I asked my friends, and they told me that his name was Santiago and that he came from Colombia.

My first impression was very good, but I was a bit shy to know him because I thought he couldn't speak Italian.

Then, I took my courage and I went to meet him. I started speaking very slowly and clearly but he replied me in a perfect Italian and he made me feel ashamed!

Then, all was ok and now we're good friends.

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Alessandro story

I attend high school Giorgio Dal Piaz in Feltre and yesterday a new boy arrives at my school. He's foreign but he knows italian very well. So my friends and I  were able to interact with him and learn many things about his original country and about his family. It's very interesting to ... (what is interesting? you need to complete) and I think that over the time we can become good friends. He is also very good at school and do not have any particular problems in any subjects. (what is the end of the story?)

 A NEW BOY ARRIVES AT SCHOOL

I attend high school Giorgio Dal Piaz in Feltre, in the north east of Italy, and yesterday a new boy arrived at my school.  He's foreign but he knows Italian very well. So my friends and I are able to interact with him and learn many things about his original country and about his family. It's very interesting to hear his story and I think that over the time we can become good friends. He is also very good at school and he doesn't have any particular problems in any subjects. For a few months he will has to our traditions and habits, but then I am sure he will feel with us.
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Simone

Via ................ n. ....

32032 Feltre

Belluno Italy

10th Dec. 2012 

Dear Linda,
It's always nice to hear from you.
In your last letter you asked me if I liked going to shops, and to what kind in particular.Well, like you, I like to go shopping, too. I usually go to a shopping centre with my friends, but I don't always buy things. When I really need to buy something, I usually go to Treviso or Belluno because in Feltre there aren't  many shops.

I like electronics shops best, because I love to have a look at new computers or cell-phones.  What about you? What is your favourite kind of shop? How often do you go shopping?
Please write soon,
love,
Simone

 

 

Simone

Via ................ n. ....

32032 Feltre

Belluno Italy

10th Dec. 2012 

Dear Linda,

it is always nice to hear from you.

the last time In your last letter you asked me if I liked going to shops, and to what kind in particular.Well, like you, I also like to go shopping, too. I usually go to the a shopping centre with my friends, but I don't always buy somethings every time. When I really need want to buy something, I usually go to Treviso or Belluno because in Feltre there aren't lots of many shops.

I prefer the like electronics shops best, because I love to have a look at new computers or cell-phones. and What about you? What is your favourite kind of shop? How often do you go shopping?

Please write me soon,

love,
 
Simone

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Elisa

Via ........... n. ...

32030 Sovramonte

Belluno, Italy

 

Tue. 11th Dec. 2012

Hi Linda,

Thanks for your letter, I hope you're well!

Yes of course, I really enjoy going shopping and I usually go with my dad or my friends once a week.

The shops I like most are clothes shops because you can find all you need from trousers to shirts and jackets. I really like accessories shops too, where you can buy earrings, bracelets and also or trinkets: bacause they're usually very cheap, and I'm always careful about money because in this way the less you spend for something, the more things you can buy !

And What about you? What did you buy at the shopping mall?

See you soon,
love,
Elisa

Davide

        Via Casa Mia n.41

                     32032 Feltre (BL)

Belluno, Italy

Tue. 11th Dec. 2012

Dear Linda

Thanks for your letter!, I'm really glad to hear from you.

I don't like going shopping very much because I don't like turn walking around the shops and a lots of things for hours, but I like going to sportswear shops and cearch looking for a football shoes or another other sports things.

I usually go shopping twice a year for ordinary clothes and once at every two months for sports clothes or football shoes, which I particularly like this because I play football. so I like buy a new shes. When I go with my mom, I try a lot of things on, and but I only buy one of this them. This is the main reason because why I don't like  shopping very much.
 

Please write me soon,
yours,
Davide

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Nicola Brandalise

Via dei Martiri 52 

Arsiè 32030

Belluno Italy

 

             Mon. 10th  Dec 2012 

Dear Linda

Thanks for your letter!

Did you really spent spend an entire day at the shopping mall? I don't like shopping so much, but I must admit that I really like technological electronics shops, and  Generally, I prefer like shopping there with my friends best.

Here The nearest place where I can find good shops is Feltre, which is 15 minutes by car far from me where I live, but I prefer going to Bassano, a little farther, because there where I have the possibilty to find more shops and even big malls.

As I said, I really like technological electronics shops, but I also like clothes shops and music shops, too, because as I play the guitar.
 

I hope to hear news from you soon,
bye for now,

                       Nicola

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Lorenzo Zannin



Via ............ n. ....

32037 Sospirolo,  

Belluno, Italy

 

Tue. 11th Dec. 2012

Dear Linda

 

I don't really like shopping! I think it's too boring and I can't understand how it is possible that some people like doing that: it's so boring for me that it makes me very tired!

However, even if though I don't like shopping there's a kind of shop which I like: the music shop! I can spend all my day trying as much many instruments as possible I can; even if they only earn CD's (?) I like those because I really love music and I can spend hours listening to it. So, if you want to go shopping with me, it's You'd better you leave me at the first music shop!

Hope to here hear from you soon
                        
Lorenzo

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ADAM SAADAOUI

Via ............. n ....
32032 Feltre
Belluno, Italy

Mon. 10th  Dec. 2012

Dear Linda

Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to reply to you.I like to hear from you.

I like going shopping and I like going to the shopping malls. When I go with my friends I like the shops where I can buy something about like videogames for, computer games or new cds. When I go with my mum I usually buy something about clothes, for example a new jeans or a new pair of shoes.

For my opinion I think the best shops are the sportswear shops where I can buy all about sports and a videogames shops, too. What about you? What shops do you like best?

 

It's all for now,

I hope to hear from you soon.

Adam

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Gabriele

Via ............... n ....
32037 Sospirolo
Belluno, Italy

Monday 10th December 2012

Dear Linda,

I do not really like shopping, and frankly honestly, I do not even have much time to do it and do not even really want to. 

In the few times I go shopping I usually buy casual and sports clothes, especially mountain clothes. And since I do not like to spend a lot on that, I always try to head allows choosing (?) choose the best quality, material and for a reasonable price.

What beautiful things have you bought it ? Please write me soon and tell me.

Best regards,
Gabriele

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