Adam

ADAM SAADAOUI

Via ............. n ....
32032 Feltre
Belluno, Italy

Mon. 10th  Dec. 2012

Dear Linda

Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to reply to you.I like to hear from you.

I like going shopping and I like going to the shopping malls. When I go with my friends I like the shops where I can buy something about like videogames for, computer games or new cds. When I go with my mum I usually buy something about clothes, for example a new jeans or a new pair of shoes.

For my opinion I think the best shops are the sportswear shops where I can buy all about sports and a videogames shops, too. What about you? What shops do you like best?

 

It's all for now,

I hope to hear from you soon.

Adam

PLEASE REMEMBER THE PARAGRAPH DIVISION

Gabriele

Via ............... n ....
32037 Sospirolo
Belluno, Italy

Monday 10th December 2012

Dear Linda,

I do not really like shopping, and frankly honestly, I do not even have much time to do it and do not even really want to. 

In the few times I go shopping I usually buy casual and sports clothes, especially mountain clothes. And since I do not like to spend a lot on that, I always try to head allows choosing (?) choose the best quality, material and for a reasonable price.

What beautiful things have you bought it ? Please write me soon and tell me.

Best regards,
Gabriele

GABRIELE I DON'T UNDERSTAND "HEAD ALLOWS CHOOSING".
YOUR LETTER SHOULD BE A LITTLE LONGER
YOU HAD FORGOTTEN PARAGRAPH DIVISION

Daniel

                                                                                                        Via ................n........
                                                                                                         32034 Pedavena (BL)
                                                                                                         Italy

                                                                                                         Tue. 10th Dec. 2012
             
           Dear Linda,
                         
          Thanks for your last letter, I'm writing to reply to you it's good to hear from you.

          I like to go shopping with my friends, because they can advise me on which
          clothes are the best for me. Very I'm going I go to a clothes shops quite often, but
          occasionally, I'm going I also go to a technolgy shops, that they are my favourite kind of
          shops.
     
          In Feltre there are few shops , and if I want to buy something special I have
          to go to Montebelluna or to Bassano, that they are two very very bigger city towns, where
          you can find all you need.

          It's all for now,
          please write me soon.
          Bye,                                                                                 
                        Daniel


IMPORTANT: WHEN YOU TELL ABOUT WHAT YOU USUALLY DO, USE THE SIMPLE PRESENT, NOT THE PRESENT CONTINUOUS
REMEMBER PARAGRAPH DIVISION, TOO



                                                                                                   Via A.Cricco n 6
                                                                                                         32034 Pedavena (BL)
                                                                                                         Italy

                                                                                                         Tue. 10th Dec. 2012
           
           Dear Linda,
                       
          Thanks for your last letter, it's good to hear from you.

          I like to go shopping with my friends, because they can advise me on which
          clothes are the best for me.  I go to a clothes shops quite often, but
          occasionally,  I also go to a technolgy shops,  they are my favourite
          shops.
     
          In Feltre there are few shops , and if I want to buy something special I have
          to go to Montebelluna or to Bassano, they are two bigger towns, where
          you can find all you need.

          It's all for now,
          please write soon.
          Bye,                                                                                 
                        Daniel

Marco

                                                                                                                 Via .............. n ......
                                                                                                                 32030 Rasai (BL)
                                                                                                                           Italy

                                                                                                         Monday 10^th Dec. 2012

Dear Linda,

I  like doing the shopping only if when I go to the shops that I like - sportswear shops and casual clothes shops for example - and then I like it more if when I go with my friends, less with my parents or my mum because they go to boring shops, we don’t have the same tastes.     

When I go at to a shopping mall, I usually spend all day there, but I don’t buy lots of things, only that what I really like because I know that if a thing something is not very good for me or it don’t completely convince me I'm not really sure I like it, I don’t won't put it on more then one time.

See you,
please write me soon                                                                 

                                                                                                          Marco.

 

nicola d'agostini

                                                                                               Via ................., n.......
                                                                                                32033 Lamon (BL), Italy.

                                                                                         Monday, 10th December 2012
Dear Linda,

thank you for your letter, it's nice to hear from you.

In your last letter you answer asked me if I like going shopping and what my favourite kinds of shops are. for As to the first question, yes, I very like to go shopping very much, and I ususally go above all in to Venice or in to Borgo Valsugana, where there are you can find the big shopping centers. I generally go with my friends or with my mum.

My favourite kinds of store shops are sports shop, clothes shop and shoe shops, but I not contempt don't go to electronics shops or videogames stores.

And What about you??? Do you often go to do shopping? and what is/are your favourite kind Do you enjoy it?

Please reply as write soon as.
love,
            Nicola.


YOUR LAST QUESTION WAS A REPETITION, SO I CHANGED IT. I USED BLUE WHEN I CHANGED THE POSITION OF THE WORDS.


                                                                                               Via pian del vescovo, n 10
                                                                                                32033 Lamon (BL), Italy.

                                                                                         Monday, 10th December 2012
Dear Linda,

thank you for your letter, it's nice to hear from you.

In your last letter you asked me if I like going shopping and what my favourite  are shops of  kinds . As to the first question, yes, I like to go shopping very much, and I ususally go to Venice or to Borgo Valsugana, where you can find big shopping centers. I generally go with my friends or with my mum.

My favourite kinds of shops are sports, clothes and shoe shops, but I don't go to electronics shops or videogames stores.
What about you? Do you often go shopping? Do you enjoy it?

Please write soon.
love,
            Nicola

Andrea Fusinato

Via ........ n .....
32037 Sospirolo
Belluno, Italy
Monday 10th December 2012

Dear Linda

Thanks for your letter, I'm writing to reply to your letter. I'm really glad to hear from you.

Inside In your last letter you answered to me asked if I like going shopping: yes I very like it very much, because when I do that I can stay with my friends or with my mum spending some good times, buying some clothes or shoes. We usually  go to clothes shops in Feltre but sometimes we go to Montebelluna or Treviso, too.

My favourite kind of shops are shoes shops, because I really love shoes. But I also like  clothes shops. and What about you? What kind of clothes do you like best?

Please write soon,                  

                                                                                                         yours,
                                                                                                         Andrea

I THINK IT'S MUCH BETTER FOR YOU IF YOU FIRST WRITE YOUR OWN LETTER, AND THEN LOOK AT YOUR FRIENDS' TEXTS, I'M SURE YOU CAN WRITE YOUR OWN IDEAS

Matteo Boschet

Via ............. n ....
32034 Pedavena
Belluno Italy
Mon. 10th of Dec. 2012

Dear Linda

Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to reply to you.

I like going shopping because when I do that I can spent spend more some time with my friends. We usually  go at to clothes shops and we try many clothes on, but sometimes we don't buy anything. My favourite shop is a shoe shop, because I love shoes, but I also like clothes shops.

My town is small and there aren't many shops, so when I go shopping with my family
we sometimes go at to Treviso because it's bigger than Feltre and there are a lot of shops with more brands than you can find here.

Hope to hear from you soon,
                 
                                                Matteo

MATTEO PLEASE NOTE THAT I CHANGED THE POSITION OF SOME SENTENCES AND THE PARAGRAPH DIVISION

lorenzo b.

                                                                                                                  Via ....... n....
                                                                                                                  32032 Feltre,
                                                                                                                  Belluno, Italy

                                                                                        Monday, 10th December 2012

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    
Hi Linda,

Thanks for your letter. How are you?

Yes I do, I love shopping, because it is a good thing for your free time.

My favorite shops are sports stores and technology stores. In these stores There I spent spend a lot of time because sport and technology are my favorite passions.
In The sports shops I usually buy a pair of shoes for football and for my freetime free time. In technology shops I can choose my ideal mobile phone and mac.

I also like to enter in go into a clockwork watchmaker's shop, where you can see a lot of watches, chronometers and more other things for men.

It's all for now,

please write soon, thanks again

                                    Lorenzo.


PLEASE NOTE THAT I CHANGED THE POSITION OF SOME SENTENCES AND THE PARAGRAPH DIVISION
 

Faoro Valentina

Via Roma n 28

32032 Feltre

Belluno Italy

 Mon. 10th of Dec.

Dear Linda,

I'm writing to reply to your letter.

 I haven' t got much  time to go shopping but when I can I usually go far from Feltre and I always spend a lot of money. I like buying a lot of things but when I go to clothes and or shoe shops I'm very happy.

They are the shops I like best because I always find something to buy and you can rarely  see ugly items.

 I enjoy shopping when I go to shops with my aunt because she is very friendly and generous and she buys me whatever I want.

Please write soon.

                        Valentina

OK VALENTINA, PLEASE NOTE I CHANGED YOUR PARAGRAPH DIVISION

Alessandro Dalla Rosa Lettera

                                                                                                                       Via ....... n.
                                                                                                                       32032 Feltre,
                                                                                                                       Belluno, Italy

                                                                                            Monday, 10th December 2012

Dear Linda,

how are you? I'm really happy that you enjoyed it at the shopping mall yesterday! I like going shopping but I have no time little time to do it. I usually go with my parents and my brother, and with him I always find some new videogames.

I like sportive sports shops best. In this these shops you can found find a lot of incredible sportive articles items for all sports! I play basketball and I love looking for new basketball shoes of this sport. They are amazing but I bought only buy a one pair in one a year because they are too very expensive.

Please write to me and tell me what you think on about sports shops.

Bye for now,
                        Alessandro

YOU HAD FORGOTTEN PARAGRAPH DIVISION AND THE FINAL CLOSING OF THE LETTER. PLEASE TAKE NOTES OF THE CORRECTIONS